by LitEroCat
Interesting writing inspiration! I tried your 'tips' and they actually work. Very nice. The turna-around on the 'SURPRISEING' part caught me. I hope you meant the twist on the word. Good job.
That 'SURPRISING' had a surprise. Hopefully, you were not the only one. I didn't want to be any more blatant. No ideas about the post script or why Lois insisted I write this???
I'd love a sequel for when the show the husband how to send his wife 1000 miles high! And....how they progress when he is healthy.
J