All Comments on 'Surrender'

Wow!

Great job of reeling in not just the amazing physical erotic feelings but the emotional mental state of submission ... especially your description of what she needs - the release of control, yet with the knowledge that with a word she is in control again. That is the dichotomy of submission!

Thanks!

alex

Oh Yes !!!

Incredible insight into the submissive mind. Absolutely delicious!

Absolutely amazing story! I actually wanted to trade places with the female character.

Exquisitely intense.

Wow... what can I say? Your piece of fiction grabbed me and wouldn't let go. I was totally immersed in the story. Wonderful! Thank you, Jerry

Great work iris