All Comments on 'Susan, Josh and I'

Ending is abrupt and silly. If they really cared so much for each other, they would try to work things out.

Hi Alex, Don't think I've read you before. I really enjoyed this story (yes, including THAT way!) The ending for me was actually quite authentic - I'm just glad I came before then... Keep it going and good luck! Feel free to check out some of mine too if you like... Ciao ciao.

Very well written, thank you.

--Alvaron

Great story, well written and made me smile, turned me on and a little sad at the end. Bravo.

Worth the 5 page commitment. Enough said.

Perfection. 'Nuff said.

Great read! I completely understand the ending. The story and the sex scenes were perfect. Keep writing.

Your stories are much more like great stories that have great sex than stories about sex. They also have an autobiographical feel - if they're not true they have a feel of being true.

This story would merit a sequel (if you haven't already written one). Leaving two such good people out of the narrator's life is a shame. Even if no group sex were involved it would be good to see how these people had managed the event. Hopefully their relationship wasn't forever ruined.

I'm cpnfused.

Alex has a penis?

And breasts?