by Susan McK
Thank you for an enjoyable read. Looking forward to more of your contributions.
once again you are just right - meaningfull and interersting build up - the physical coming together is with some reticence - you dont have the characters doing the entire kamasutra on their first time -
It is a real story - well told - perhaps it really happened -
One of your skills is to leave the reader with the impression that this is a version of one of your own experiences -
More please
there are so many rubbishy trashy stories that it takes far too long for an infrequent visitor to find yours - so now I have started to bookmark them-
Certainly in my limited experience you are the finest writer here -
your stories have a ring of sincerity which suggest a personal experience basis -
You write with sensitivity and about emotions other than lust before coming naturally to a plausible consumation of the act - descibe with poetic understatement that make them far more exditing than the 4 worder gymnatics which are usual fare here - do continue please
and then your male character had to stick two fingers in her ass.
Talk about deflation
You guys cant write without showing your bi side
You captured her emotions so perfectly. Thanks for another wonderful erotic story.
. . . surely drawn from real life experience. The realism made this well-written story even more arousing. Thank you for taking us along on your journey of discovery.
One of the best !!!! Keep going !!!! (Elena 27 - grcaramela from Athens-Greece)
She was a bit like this, really shy. It took some time, somewhere around 4 in the morning we finally made love and she went wild? Pretty amazing, hard to get her started, then tough to get her to stop. Then she began showing up in the evenings, knowing my wife was a night nurse at the hospital.
Talk about.. trouble?
I took Smack, my black bitch over to my amigo Festus place where I swapped her for a big yellow girl. Straight swap of my best coon dawg for a golden retriever. Best swap ever.