All Comments on 'Swap & Discover'

by Susan McK

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
i want to meet this woman

sexy generous exciting

PAPATOADPAPATOADover 18 years ago
Good Story

Thank you for an enjoyable read. Looking forward to more of your contributions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
once again you are just right

once again you are just right - meaningfull and interersting build up - the physical coming together is with some reticence - you dont have the characters doing the entire kamasutra on their first time -

It is a real story - well told - perhaps it really happened -

One of your skills is to leave the reader with the impression that this is a version of one of your own experiences -

More please

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
once more into the breach

there are so many rubbishy trashy stories that it takes far too long for an infrequent visitor to find yours - so now I have started to bookmark them-

Certainly in my limited experience you are the finest writer here -

your stories have a ring of sincerity which suggest a personal experience basis -

You write with sensitivity and about emotions other than lust before coming naturally to a plausible consumation of the act - descibe with poetic understatement that make them far more exditing than the 4 worder gymnatics which are usual fare here - do continue please

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I was sitting here stroking myself and near coming

and then your male character had to stick two fingers in her ass.

Talk about deflation

You guys cant write without showing your bi side

RealDocRealDocover 16 years ago
SIMPLY SUPERB

You captured her emotions so perfectly. Thanks for another wonderful erotic story.

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 15 years ago
A realistic depiction . . .

. . . surely drawn from real life experience. The realism made this well-written story even more arousing. Thank you for taking us along on your journey of discovery.

grcaramelagrcaramelaover 13 years ago
Fantastic !!!

One of the best !!!! Keep going !!!! (Elena 27 - grcaramela from Athens-Greece)

pa47epa47ealmost 13 years ago
well done........

This is the way it should be done..........

imhaplessimhaplessabout 11 years ago
Oh yeah

Beautifully written, very erotic, and exceptionally entertaining!

darknight25darknight25over 10 years ago
Sweet

Sweet story. I wonder where it is going next. Can't wait!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
omg what a story

I hope u keep up the good stores. that is1 in a hundren

midnighteddiemidnighteddiealmost 6 years ago
Swap

I like how your story gives a woman's point of view.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Did a swap once

She was a bit like this, really shy. It took some time, somewhere around 4 in the morning we finally made love and she went wild? Pretty amazing, hard to get her started, then tough to get her to stop. Then she began showing up in the evenings, knowing my wife was a night nurse at the hospital.

Talk about.. trouble?

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Did a swap once

I took Smack, my black bitch over to my amigo Festus place where I swapped her for a big yellow girl. Straight swap of my best coon dawg for a golden retriever. Best swap ever.

Stick_Stick_almost 4 years ago
Very Hot

I love the reluctance and then her giving into her desires.

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