All Comments on 'Sweet Patrick'

From an erotic standpoint, this just doesn't do much for me -- but then again, I'm not fond of homoerotica.

That being said, this story stands well upon its own as a complex, interesting character study. Your protagonist has a conflicting, duelist personality -- on the one hand, she seems very vanilla with her lover in real life, but her sexual curiosity(whilst gazing upon the activities of two gay lovers), belies that banal nature she apparently portrays.

This could make a good opening into a much more broader story with this character. Will she explore this sexual nature or continue to "Rear Window" her fantasy life?

Very exciting.....please do continue. Maybe the neighbours could give Toby some much needed sexual advice, perhaps take him under their wing and teach him how to please his wife ;)

I read this story on your Deviant Art page and loved it then as well. Am I imagining this or have you played around with it a little bit? It's still extremely delicious and as you know I'm a sucker for a tasty slice of boi/boi. The end is rather a tease, I too hope there's going to be a bit more of this story.

Cheers!