All Comments on 'Swim Team and Teresa in 1976'

by vauntedtolentino

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Be specific

As written, your story is simply that your girl screwed a lot of guys. Be a little more specific so that we have something to latch onto. Pick out a couple of guys. Maybe one's a friend, maybe the other's a rival. Tell us about them and how they made you feel: jealous, superior, bonding, etc. You might try a little bit of plot, too: how did it finish and affect you?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Me Too!!!

I worked security at a local high school. I kept teasing these guys and finally late one night after practice, arranged to meet four of them in the pool, naked. We met in the deep end and moved to the shallows. These boys were around 16 to 17, and I was 45. I let all four fuck me, there in the pool. They did not last long, but they were hard and rough!!!

dumblonde19dumblonde19over 6 years ago

was this a true story? u made it sound so real! :)

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