All Comments on 'Swing and Burn'

by MaitressedeSoie

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Hope you continue this.

stephenchapmanstephenchapmanalmost 11 years ago

Well written extreme seduction. Like that it seems like the middle of a larger arc. Any plans to expand or continue?

MaitressedeSoieMaitressedeSoiealmost 11 years agoAuthor

I'm working on the follow-up now and I hope to get it up within a week or two. Keep checking, and thank you for the feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

that was a real treat loved reading that great story

JuliaHandelJuliaHandelover 10 years ago
Vivid description of severe pain

Description of orgasm simultaneous with pain becomes plausible in the story. Author holds the reader’s interest through details of hardware and accessories.

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