All Comments on 'Swingers By Chance'

Nicely done. The setup sounded as spontanious as a shuttle launch.

The 'bed' in my boat is called a vee berth because of its shape, and my wife and I never considered it too small for 4 people. It wasn't especially comfortable for sleeping with 4, but sleeping wasn't usuually what we had in mind when we were in it.

Write more.

I liked your story from an overall standpoint. I think that the grammar/spelling problems are distracting for the reader, who is trying to get into the flow of the story.

With respect to your question on the protagonist, I think it was Cindy, dragging Sherry into it. Sherry seems to passively accept it, not just in the bedroom scene, but also in her mode of dress, after they changed, compared to Cindy.

I am not hung up on accuracy of the nautical terms, since I don't know anything about them. It's a story, after all, not a manual about sailboats.

You could get a "Chapter 2" out of the storyline, if you choose to do so.

Thanks for writing the story.

Hey! C'mon everybody! This is a very erotic story with a real ring of truth to it. Its also a firt-time contri, and as such, real good. Lets hope Acerider posts more stories here. I know we'll sure want to read them.

As normal for him, Ace Rider just wrote and outstanding fantasy story, except he claims it was true. I loved it. No, I don't think the women designed this swapping session, it appears to have a scenario that often happens when two couples are camping and one has to go pee in the dark in the middle of the night without benefit of lighting. I'm wondering....will he continue the story, and just where are the women's ovulating periods in this very erotic setting. Perhaps the four parents could become new parents as well, with each other's spouses?

You have the rest of the weekend to finish and Sherry's co-worker to add in another chapter. You have heard of key parties. Have a boat party. The wives get on a different boat than their husbands. Good writing. Believable.

nice story

Liked the boat/bed set up.

I enjoyed your story and hope you keep it up!

I WISH WE COULD START SWINGING THIS WAY WITH A NICE COUPLE, I AM SURE MY UNWILLING WIFE WILL NOT BE ABLE TO SAY NO IN A SITUATION LIKE THIS. I READ IT TO HER AND SHE JUST SMILED

My wife was unexpectedly excited after reading this story. She is now on line looking for nearby swing clubs to visit and wants to post a picture on line. She is also interested in meeting other married men "on a date".

I wonder how any wife including mine will say 'no' under such circumstances. I would love this to happen to us. it is my fantasy now. WISH US LUCK

I wish this happened to us, VOW. What a great way to start swinging. I think it all happened suddenly and naturally

How about another few chapters?

Not a lot left to "chance" by your hosting couple if you ask me. But you and your wife seemed to be willing participants too!

You need to edit the continuity of the story. At times, I didn't who he or her was. add a few more sentences or names. This story concept is not new. I've seen it other places, also on a boat. So was this really a sailboat or power boat, unclear here too.

Sailors do to take notice.

It was planned. One got cold feet.

Why do so many of the female characters in these stories have D breasts? I often will stop reading as soon as I see that; especially if it's in the first paragraph.