All Comments on 'Swords & Daggers'

I really liked the story, but it was over way too quickly. I think even if you broke it up into chapters, since it says to be continued, it would still be lacking as an opening segment. But in terms of your writing ability and the scene, it was very good.

I must agree that it needs to be longer but wow. That has always been my fantasy and you hit it dead on. Very nicely done

yawn