All Comments on 'Tabitha, the Naughty Nurse'

You lost me when you lost your whole story, calling it HIS bed! That kills a major part of the story!

Until she mentioned the specific "injection", I was hoping that there'd be a reunion, with whatever happened perhaps being based on the outcome of the game.

I agree that it's a lot like porn--the only reason the story is there is as a backdrop to the sex. Erotica is more of a sexual story. For the most part, it was well-written, but I think there could've been a little more action and description to make it hotter and so the reader is submerged in the moment.

It reminds me of one of those70s porn movies where you're dying for some kind of a story to develop but it's boom bam and all over ... never happens that way - never!