All Comments on 'Tainted Love Ch. 03'

Slow down and EDIT! Spell check is not enough! 2*

more. how many more chapters. does it end happy. does she get to "one up" her snotty brother and sister in law? does dad finally get to see she is as worthy as his jerk of a son? THANK YOU

I would have given you 4 or 5 stars if it was more readable. Please get an editor before posting any more chapters.

The content is good, the story line as well, but the grammatical & spelling errors make it almost unreadable.

In the first chapter he had a million dollar smile, but then it changed to a 1000 watt smile. Maybe they are equal, but I doubt it. That would be $1000 per watt. Then in this chapter it's only a $100 smile. In Seattle his rental vehicle started out as a truck, then became a Jeep, and finally it was a Range Rover. Keep trying, with an editor in future -- especially for grammar, punctuation and word forms (and consistency).