by geronimo_appleby
I loved this short story and the effort you went to to write it from a woman's perspective. I have done a bit of this in my Guilt series and found it to be a lot of fun but also a lot of work to make it convincing and you certainly did that! Well done 5 stars from me!
I like the idea of the female police woman wanting to explore her sexuality but it never materilized to something realy interesting in the story. I also believe that the story could be shorter. Although most sex scenes were very arousing they were also repetitive. Finally I liked the language you used.