All Comments on 'Take Only as Directed Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Come on!

Black people don't say "wid dese." I've lost interest now.

MadzillahMadzillahover 11 years ago
fantastic skill!

With language and vocabulary. I have not seen its like here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You have a great idea for a story.

Get it registered, patented, whatever, with a publisher. Book and movie to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story

longer chapters pleasssssse

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