All Comments on 'Taken'

that was truly disgusting...

i enjoy a little pain, but he should be horse whipped

I don't usually read stories where there isn't consent. If this were consentual I would have liked it better. But well written. His character certainly more fleshed out than hers.

So scary yet so much a turn on.

i generally enjoy nonconcentual stories with some force, but who ever said "he should be horse whipped", i totally agree...

i know i would be working on getting out if i were her, and as they say revenge is sweet... and i know i would get even.

this doesn't even deserve a place in Literotica...

This was a great story, the mixture of nonconcent and bondage was entertaining. I think it was very well writen, would have loved a little more on her personality. I could have enjoyed another page or two of this story continued.

This story was great, amaingly written but so hot. I loved how you had a great build up in the begginning but would have liked more details about her. I would have loved a few more pages of this story.

It's always psychologically very interesting to read that particular fantasy from the woman's point of view... but it isn't always as well written or erotic as that. That is frighteningly good!

Yur word made the events so real and enjoyable and very erotic! Do give thought in your future writing about using bukkate as a special delite! Thank you for your time, Nekoca@lycos.com

Sexy. Too much pain for my liking, but still hot enough to excite me. Wish there was more writing on the actual fuck, she is too dazed to be able to enjoy his cock properly.

Love how amazingly well written this is. Not too long and not too short, you captured the psychological manipulation perfectly and the outcome of minor Stockholm syndrome. So hot, I tried staving off my orgasm until the end but I just couldn't. So good, keep it up

This was NOT punishment. This was being BULLIED to do what he wants. BIG difference.