All Comments on 'Taken'

Love the thrill I got reading this story. Loved the outcome, very erotic story.

I couldn't stop reading it when I started. I don't find many stories in this genre that I like but wow, you sure know how to write it well. Keep up the good work.

I'm wondering what is next?

This is a really great story. It should be required reading for all newcomers to Literotica.

Okay let's see, the first sentence needs reworking. It's long, redundant and makes little sense. The first sentence in the second paragraph is so long it should have its own zip code. Paragraphs drag on, redundant word usage, and misused words....need I go on?

Good attempt but does need some work. I noticed we don't know how the duct tape came about. There were many spelling errors not to mention usage issues. The premise of the story was hot and sweet at the same time. Using an editor would be a good idea next time. Nice work overall but does make me wonder who did the reading on the final submission.

This is one of the most seductive, outrageous and thrilling stories I've read on here. Keep up the great work.

Very good story. I enjoy your work. I will be reading more. He should have succeed her ass.

Absolutely amazing!! I am wet already. Not only was it seductive, but a romantic story as well. Absolutely stunning

I sent this to my friend and she absolutely LOVED this.