All Comments on 'Taken'

Fetish? Wrong section. Reluctance as a tag is a joke, too. It's not a fetish if the person being modified is being drugged and tied down until no longer able to resist.

"Good! In a few months you won't have to worry about moving." she said. "I'll have you so fat you'll barely be able to feed yourself." Really? At some point she will be unable to lift him or keep him clean. Bed sores are not sexy. And if she is planning on becoming a breeding machine who will force him into lactating and feeding her children, you can add child abuse to the mix.

I would suggest serious psychological counseling - but I doubt you would go through with it.

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I dunno what those other people are talking about but we need more like this, great work!

Everytime I think about this story I have to stop and masturbate.

I absolutely loved this story. I would loveva sequel if you're up for it. I would definitely like to read his castration and lactation.

this story belongs in erotic Horror

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am sure it has given many men Nightmares

Aw jeez. Kinda dark don't cha think? Where is a sequel?