All Comments on '"Taken" by Surprise'

The imagination is the biggest sexual toy we have and to fill it up with history and facts ruin it. Not knowing is better than knowing.

You need an editor dude.

I had to stop reading due to the appalling grammar.

the concept was good and the story was good..but an editor would have made it much better to read.

nick

Enjoyed it. Right to the point! 👍

Did she not care she had unprotected sex with a stranger?

Vjery nice, thanks for sharing.

Okay, i dont even know why I chose to read this, but few things

A. It’s a freaking open area and if she did not want to be taken by a starnger she could have just shouted...someone or the other MUSTve been in earshot

B. She had unprotected sex with a random ass stranger and he even came inside of her...and she’s cool about that. Wtf? She could’ve gotten AIDS or other such STDs or maybe even ended up pregnant. Unrealistic shit

C. WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK DOES SHE MEAN BY I WOULD NOT MIND BEING TAKEN BY A STRANGER AGAIN?!?

STUPID STORY UGH

I wish it was longer!

Hey Folks....It's FICTION Get a grip A fantasy is just that, a FANTASY