All Comments on 'Taken Ch. 02'

...at the 8 inch girth. But a fiver it is anyway, because I loved the games he played with her. That villain is a fascinating evil.

Your good imagination shows in the details you're working into the story. I also tripped over the "girth," but it was easily overlooked, as were a smattering of other minor errors. It'll be fun to see where you take this when (I hope) you continue.

please continue...

I loved your story.. great great great

I saw the stories you have on here, they lookeded promising, but they all petered out too soon.

Why the stop?