All Comments on 'Taken in Battle Ch. 03'

by LadyElaenaBlack

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KittenCuddlerKittenCuddleralmost 11 years ago
Very enticing!

This story is a very enticing read. You have me hooked that's for sure! It's unique and engaging. The characters are proving to be fascinating as you slowly reveal more of their individual characterstics. And you just had to leave it on a cliffhanger, didn't you? Well I happily await the next instalment. Well done!

inspector123inspector123almost 11 years ago
Hooked!

Can't wait for the next chapter. Can you please make it longer? One page is too short!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
holey fuck....

did not see that coming...can ya say cliffhanger...I never tell an author to rush a chapter but damn it I want #4 now! PLEASE!!!

LadyElaenaBlackLadyElaenaBlackalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks! :)

I' working on chapt 4 now :) If you guys want it longer it'll bea few days before I add it xD Then course it's pending lol be patient!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Noooooooooooooooooo!

Deep breath. You can't kill her because Tristan and a sheep might be an interesting love story for some, but I think it violates Lit rules. :D:D:D

LadyElaenaBlackLadyElaenaBlackalmost 11 years agoAuthor
A sheep?! Lol

I don't think there's sheep in snow bound mountain areas lol and if there are theyre for eating! Nothing else! Lol where'd you get that idea anyway? xD

And I'm saying nothing else :L not spoiling it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I briefly thought 'yak' instead of sheep. As macho as Tristan is, I wasn't sure he is THAT tough....

LadyElaenaBlackLadyElaenaBlackalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Lol

Sorry to disappoint, but no Bestiality of any kind xD Straight human to human lol xD

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
truelly.....not advocating animal 'love'

Just attempting to reassure myself that Skara will be okay because the alternatives are not acceptable.....and I'm a smartass. ;D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
She'll be fine

I can already tell Skara's bad ass. Plus she's the main character. She'll be fine. But I am dying to know what happens next so please upload soon!

evonnaevonnaalmost 11 years ago
ooohh, a cliffie, didn't see that coming.

and Skara will be fine, she's the leading lady, and Tristan wouldn't have lied about her new life, I'm guessing. Maybe it'll be a little orgy, or some blood letting or something like that.. but Tristan mentioned "guilty", so it has to be something pretty bad and unpleasant! (maybe they'll try to kill her but she escapes!) ok, sorry, enough speculation. Can't wait to find out!

Good story.

RenaeBaby815RenaeBaby815almost 11 years ago
Great read!!!

Amazing story so far!

Btw Happy Birthday!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved it!

Keep the chapters coming!!

spearishspearishalmost 11 years ago
Very fast

Maybe a little too fast but intriguing non the less.

KittenCuddlerKittenCuddlerover 10 years ago
Curious reader....

Could you please provide an update about the next chapter? Pretty please? I am wondering about when I can get a fix of this story :-) thanks so much!

LadyElaenaBlackLadyElaenaBlackover 10 years agoAuthor
Update!!

Right! So sorry for the delay xD I've been dead busy at Uni but I hope to get a chapter up within the month xD

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please!!! Where is Chapter 4?

When you updated, you said you would have the next chapter up within a month.

That was over 2 months ago. I think this story is BRILLIANT, so please don't make us, your readers, wait any longer. Please! Please! submit chapter 4.

We just want to know badly, WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? :)

LadyElaenaBlackLadyElaenaBlackover 10 years agoAuthor
Sorry!

Feeling Very guilty guys xD I promised to have it done but got sidetracked, as you do!

I am working on it right now...So...I'm hoping (cant promise!) but hoping to get a fair bit done tonight, then finish it by the end of this week!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please Hurrry!

I can't wait for chapter 4. You commented at the beginning of December, and still no chapter! I'm sat on the edge of my seat here, tearing my hair out, biting my nails, chomping at the bit. PLEASE WHERE IS CHAPTER 4?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hmmm!

Still sat on the edge of my seat here, biting my nails (I'm down to the knuckles now) etc. And still awaiting an update. ;)

Kaffeine1Kaffeine1about 10 years ago
Cliffhanger city!

Please please please update! I love your characters! And I have a question- weren't Tristan and Daganet names of some of King Arthur's knights? Are you going to tie in any more Arthurian legend?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
It's taking too long....

We're all still waiting for that elusive chapter 4. Any ideas on when it is going to be ready? Please make it soon. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Oh please let there be more???

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Seriously, this site should just warn us before reading a story that its author has abandonned it, no need to waste anyone's time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wth????

What kinda ending is that?!?! O.O

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
That's a shame

What a shame you made her a sacrifice, I thought this story was going somewhere.

carmenvampcarmenvampabout 4 years ago
Wish there was more

Was something planned for a future chapter? Why t talk about offering her a life if she's to be a sacrifice?

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