All Comments on 'Taking a Chance'

Wonderful story please keep writing

Very good. More, please.

it is nice to read about a guy not only willing to take his time with a woman but also to help her through the storms of her past.

I loved it!! Awesome job Eviant!!

This is such a sweet story! The characters are beautifully described. So much detail! It is so wonderful to read about a caring man. I love that they have different social backgrounds. Wonderful touch! You're an awesome author. I cannot wait to read more stories/ poems! Love you girl! <3 Mimi

OMG I love this! Totally awesome story, so touching and yes so refreshing to read not to mention amazingly erotic.

Keep it up girl please!

Very well written, this is first and foremost a story. The pace was slow enough to develop the characters, but fast enough to keep me interested. I loved the scene when he came for the first time. You really got inside his head as he restrained himself and was sensitive to her fears and later her desires. Excellent story. Oh, and I enjoyed the nickname you gave Jacob.

I love a good love story and this was a great one :) I really liked how he had to patiently win her over, it was very sweet. And the sex was HOT on top of it all!

I like your style of writing as much as I like the topics you pick up. You manage to tell somewaht sensitive things in an entertaining and plausible way.

You seem to have a thing for getting to the point, but don't leave out the neccessary buildup. It's just shorter than... well... Shorter than I could write it.

Thanks again for this one!