by JANAMARIE
superb - excellent - enjoyable - cock jerker, I give this a 4.99 as there is one spelling error. "scene for seen" Write more!!!
Your story was well done, fun to read. This is the kind of story most of us like to read. Keep them coming.
Great story, well written, good fantasy, good story line!
I likes it very much!
Another great story very well written. Only wish that they had completed the arse fucking at a later date. Never mind we both enjoyed it and had great sex afterwards. Thanks!!
Julie & Mike
couldn't get past the language.everything is forced and formal.people just do not talk like this .for me i can just say keep trying
The whole story was just too unrealistic and detracted from what could otherwise a good read.