by JANAMARIE
The whole story was just too unrealistic and detracted from what could otherwise a good read.
couldn't get past the language.everything is forced and formal.people just do not talk like this .for me i can just say keep trying
Another great story very well written. Only wish that they had completed the arse fucking at a later date. Never mind we both enjoyed it and had great sex afterwards. Thanks!!
Julie & Mike
Great story, well written, good fantasy, good story line!
I likes it very much!
Your story was well done, fun to read. This is the kind of story most of us like to read. Keep them coming.
superb - excellent - enjoyable - cock jerker, I give this a 4.99 as there is one spelling error. "scene for seen" Write more!!!