All Comments on 'Tale of the Summer Home'

The story line has possibilities, but your spelling is the pits! I suspect you use a spelling checker, because all the words are valid - just wrong in the context. Not to mention all the words plain missed out. Do better please next time.

just so u kno you smoke the bud from the plant, not the leaves.

You must have been smoking the ganja when you submitted this story. Obviously zero proof reading went into this story.

It was also about 3 chapters too long.

2 stars is all I could muster.