by LC10
Two comments and they're about spelling! Kinda reflects my feelings on the story, it's dull. Sorry, but in the whole beverly series every character seems the same and non of them seem to have any thoughts or emotions. All she does is fuck different names, but the characters behind the names are all pretty much the same.
I also see no love at all between her husband and her. He's just another interchangeable cock for her to fuck. I'm nor trying to be nasty, I'm honestly trying to point out issues in the story.
How about adding both passion and emotion to these folks, other than how turned on by everything they get. It's dull, and unless they've got a psychiatric condition, totally silly.