All Comments on 'Talla's Fallen Temple Ch. 18'

Excellent, as always!

Thanks very much!

Always enjoy reading the next chapter.

I know these chapters are necessary to fill out the story line but now I have to wait another month for Talla and Zair'ho's story to continue. Please write more I am waiting. Chris

Sorry didn't mean to call Zair'lo a ho'!!!

Thank You! New reader and hooked! The story is a good one and keeps you wanting more. Good editing and flow. I have never made comments before, but I have really enjoyed your writting and the story line, both done very well. Keep up the good work and look forward to next installation. Well Done!

So, I'm thinking this needs to b a movie! It would have to b

A triple x though!

I'm loving this story!

That is the problem with a great story you read it so fast and you get to the end and its not finished yet :) I can not wait for the next chapter and the one after that and so on and so on. I love this story can't wait to see how it plays out