by xtorch
That is the problem with a great story you read it so fast and you get to the end and its not finished yet :) I can not wait for the next chapter and the one after that and so on and so on. I love this story can't wait to see how it plays out
So, I'm thinking this needs to b a movie! It would have to b
A triple x though!
I'm loving this story!
Thank You! New reader and hooked! The story is a good one and keeps you wanting more. Good editing and flow. I have never made comments before, but I have really enjoyed your writting and the story line, both done very well. Keep up the good work and look forward to next installation. Well Done!
I know these chapters are necessary to fill out the story line but now I have to wait another month for Talla and Zair'ho's story to continue. Please write more I am waiting. Chris