by ChynaMarie
first you need an editor. second, i can't believe her brother would let her date an old man! the age gap is too big!!!
I didn't think girly girl had the GUTZ to handle that dude. Made an old jade like me proud of her. Some men need a woman to work the vajayjay magick to make them stand up and realize; it ain't all about them and what they want or think. Ok?!?!?!?!?
Is never enough after you have desired it for such a long time!
Cade don't be a dick.... You love her and only want her so let her know. She might be leaving for a year but, damn.... Next chapter please!!!
I was waiting for you to update this story, don't get me wrong I liked "Please cowboy?" but this one is my favorite out of the two, I love the hot and cold chemistry these two characters have with each other and can't wait to read more about them. So can't wait for chapter 3!!!
Thanks for not abandoning this story. I loved the tension between the two and I hope his head explodes while she is away for the year.
Hurry with the next chapter.
i need next chapter pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
this was ah-mazing, just saying. Hate to be one of those people, but you just have to speed write because I need an update.