All Comments on 'Taming Feminists to 1950s Housewife'

This story makes no sense, If this is supposed to be background info then I hope your writing gets better, I had a hard time Following this....I do not see a clear story line, also wrong Category, I wouldn't call this BDSM, more like NON consent

First, it is of course nonconsent. Many read in both bdsm and noncon but it does matter that you place the story correctly. Next, it is too disjointed. Too many scenes that are too short in length and detail. There is no emotion, good or bad. Even when the lawyer is detailing the events with the ex-senator, it is almost clinical. Since there is not much straight out stroke material, you need to given more to invest the reader in the horror/power thrill of the events.

Is this a story or a rant?

Makes no fucking sense. I suggest you try again only this time stop jumping around from POV to POV. Start at the beginning and proceed from there.