All Comments on 'Target Audience Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Interesting Story Line

Great possibilities, well written with characters that can be expanded, depth can be added depending on how many chapters it goes and the ex-pat situation is an interesting thing for the families that tag along.

Could become highly entertaining for Jake or closer to HELL, just depends.

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