All Comments on 'Teacher'

'But by the end of the summer we had lost it.' The writing was excellent, the end was terrible. I fully realize this happens in real life, but up until the last paragraph I was very pleased with the intense story.

I loved the way you set it up but you ultimately just set up for a let down. Did you lose interest after the first couple of paragraphs? Sure did seem like it

the beginng is cool but the fag person who wrote it made it to short

The story was going great and then a brick wall. while its 'realistic' it feels, as others have stated, like you lost interest.