All Comments on 'Teacher Appreciation Day'

Your grasp of grammar is terrible. You change personal pronouns, and verb tenses even within a sentence. If you really are a teacher of English it's no wonder so many of our children aren't learning how to write.

It marred, for me, what was otherwise a fairly good erotic tale. Use your WORD tools, Mr. Teacher.

I don't vote. I have to agree with the previous commenter. Use one tense and stick with it. Makes for a more coherant, smoother story. Try using an editor and keep writing.

While there are some structural issues so loudly noted by others, there is also a talent for capturing the delicious thrill of the unknown. This story takes the scenario between seduction, submission, and some classic teacher kink and it had elements that were quite enjoyable.

I never realized that the teaching profession had perks along that line, that the parents could be so grateful. Now this is all right. You don't get dismissed from the school for being nice to parents. I always knew I wasn't in the best calling.

God story.

Despites some editing mistakes, I found the story hot. It had all the important elements that could make this one a good bate read. Don't worry too much about the grammatical mistakes, there would be tons of people who would volunteer to proofread your work. Me included!

Had that fantasy of several Moms over the years...good story.