Terrific story and a great finishing line. You need to write more of this as you are a very good writer compared to the others. Descriptive so we can see the story in our head like a movie, yet to the point.
Been having fun writing on the site and sharing stories through the chat-rooms. I enjoy reading great stories and sharing my experiences and exploring fantasies about my fetishes. I look forward to adding to my stories and, perhaps, making a few new friends in the process. Fee...