All Comments on 'Teaching Death About Love'

I think you should either get an editor or fire the one you have. There were so many writing and grammar errors it was rather sad.

This story sucks

Sorry, I couldn't understand the language this piece was written in. Was it supposed to be English?

appalling grammar, story line and content

I couldn't get past the first paragraph. This is so full of grammatical errors that I think my eyes bled. You need an editor, a good one, and then you need to submit a fully edited version of this. The title and description are what pulled me in to read this, but the errors made my head hurt.

Just never write again!!! Trash.