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by Frotter

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lesliejoneslesliejonesalmost 19 years ago
Good control

I enjoyed your story and hope you keep on with this kind of work. I myself find the teacher-student relationship a fascinating one and I like it especially that you showed control and some realism in not letting them have sex in this first encounter.

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Hot Start

I only gave you a 3 because you need to use an editor. "Your" - indicating possesion. "You're" - a short for of 'you are'. Those common errors took away from the story. A good start to your story. Keep writing.

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