by tammy34c
You really need to think up something to differentiate it from the dozens of similar stories I've read.
I loved it ..Keep up the good work looking forward to more of you work !!!
Hope to see more of this story. You have just wetted my intrigue as to where they go from her house to maybe at school and more about her riding him.
I think some men who have little experience with women or who have difficulty relating to women have this exact fantasy. Have a huge cock, brutally fuck her with it and she cant help but fall in love with you. This is the kind of fantasy that puts men in prison when they act it out. The writing, grammer and the like is OK.
Can't read a guy's story, but when women tell a story about getting fucked it's usually great. More please!
It is improbable that she would have responded like that. Plus, she is 22, her first teaching job, with a mountain of student loan debt, it's impossible that she would live on an acreage in the country...try a one bedroom studio apartment befitting her crappy salary.
If you're going to write about rape, at least have the common courtesy of writing it truthfully: hard, brutal and painful for the woman. This belonged in erotic couplings.
Your stories don't 'mess about'...you know what you want to say, and say it easily and succinctly...like your style. It's a short, erotic fantasy story...keep them coming!
I read the storys for the sex and you write well, I love the storys from you Tammy.The how can she have such a nice place mean little to me, I just enjoy the story.