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by Gelephor

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txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
Very...

different and that is a good thing...to come up with something so original is a very good thing...i liked it and hope you keep writing in here, you have a very interesting outlook on things and process. Thank you for allowing us to read you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

ozland234ozland234almost 18 years ago
Liked it

Very nice and creative. please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
good story line

It would be ironic if the now prostitute was paid to service her once husband. Do you think he would notice? That would make an interesting chapter that would add a further twist to the tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good stuff

This had a fantastic build-up and world design, but alas... it seemed to fall short on in the sex scene department. Had there been another scene (the second night) of debauchery, surely this would have been a superior read.

xenoveistxenoveistalmost 6 years ago

This was really great! Are you still writing? Honestly would love to see a sequel somehow, or just more stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I very much enjoyed this. Sad that there is no more to follow.

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I kind of get off on submissiveness. Not like, dog collars and leashes. Just the unspoken but unquestioned understanding that men have the pleasure and I do the work.