All Comments on 'Teamwork'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wow

That was fucking hot. Wish I was a part of that!!

-Christie

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hot, but...

Good story, but could use some dialog, otherwise it comes off sounding like a book report.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
To be Jenny...

Good story. I would like to read more about Jenny. I would like to have been Jenny. Lots of potential to this...keep it going. Maybe let Jenny be more of a submissive in this.

LynnluvsLynnluvsabout 13 years ago
Very good sweetie!

Had me wishing I were there!

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