- Incest/Taboo
- Teasing Ch. 03
- Comments
All Comments on 'Teasing Ch. 03'
by Enticing_Vixen
- 20 Comments
Anonymousover 17 years agoThis story is so wonderful, so passionate, and so touching. I hope you write MANY MORE chapters to it.
Anonymousover 17 years agoYou have everyone's attention. Please continue quickly to write the next chapter. I can't wait
Nivramover 17 years agoYeah, that's some tease all right. First, a brother and sister have a crush on each other. Then, whoops, so sorry, they really aren't related. Yes, there is a nice emotional side to the story. However, without an actual taboo this really should have been submitted under something more appropriate, like the First Time category.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoPlease tell me there is more!! I can't bear it if you leave us hanging here! Great storyline and exceptionally well written.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoThis is such a wonderful story! So passionate and beautiful! PLEASE write more chapters!
Anonymousover 16 years agoit sounds like he is a gold digger and only after her money and inheritence
Anonymousover 14 years agohe just wants her money she needs to see a lawyer and get a prenup that bans him and his parents from ever touching her money only then should she concider marring him
Anonymousover 13 years ago..that was rather cute! As for the comments about Brian being a gold-digger, I would have to disagree since his own parents are the business partners of her real parents. That makes them both pretty much of equal standing.
Can't wait to read more!
Anonymousabout 13 years agowhy tell us you are going to finish when you know damn well you never will
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThis is a really cute and sweet story. You'd better finish this story. Wonder what takes you so long to write the chapter 4, if you plan so.
Anonymousover 12 years ago1) finish the story NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
2) find some one else to finish it for you NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
3) delete the sorry waste of time so other readers don't have to be left hanging and delete it NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymousover 11 years agoWhy does he get to orgasm and she doesn't. He didn't seem to care - just got his own pleasure.
Allthatiwantover 11 years agoThat was amazingly fantastic and very touching and unexpected oh my god that was please do right more. Thank you.
Turtle1952over 7 years agoreally enjoying this and wondering if you have some more to add?
