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by Edge23

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undiscoveredloveundiscoveredlovealmost 16 years ago
hot.

It's hot from the short end of it. Though, if you added more detail and made it a bit longer it'd have been hotter! But nice cliffhanger at the end, i'm hoping for a chapter two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Ok, what happened 2 the Lolly? : )

Good beginning 4 a series of stories about my fave RedHead. Curious as 2 what happened with the Lolly, tho? I fully expected Sarah 2 B thrusting it between her lower lips, but NOPE! Fooled ME on THAT one. I guess that Could lead 2 a Yeast infection, but hey, this is Fiction, remember? No VD in storyLand, I think! More chapters, please, U DO write well Edge. My cox aching 4 MORE Lindsay, Gimme what I desire, OK! Good stuff, howEVER brief. <sigh>

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Here's an author's note: everything I've written is fiction. My characters may be similar to people I know, but the actions that occur have never happened. That I know of. Also...please please PLEASE leave comments. I enjoy them, good or bad...same goes with feedback. I ...