All Comments on 'Telepath King Ch. 13'

seriously, if you aren't sure about you're or your, just remember that the ' is an 'a'. you're is you are.

"As for the sex, that's in you're nature." would be your. That's in you are nature just doesn't sound right, does it? Editor, please?

But you're really frustrating me with the way you fuck up using 'your' and 'you're'!! It is quite simple - 'you're' is a contraction of 'you are',. so instead of saying 'you are', you say 'you're'.

'Your' is the possive - this is 'your' story. You're (you are) a great story teller when you get your grammar right. If you're (you are) unsure, then get an editor or proof reader to assist.

Honestly, it's like fingernails being scraped down a chalkboard - it sets my teeth on edge!

I don't know about the other 2, but you got no complaints from me.... keep up the good work.

I'm just about struggling now. I agree with Scifiant in that it's becoming like nails on a board. I winced a few times you're a good story teller but need a proof reader. Their got mixed with there're in there today that nearly ripped the balance. I know my spelling is attr.. atr..bad.. lol so can't complain tp much but apart from that minor niggle keep up the good work.

Gini

Dont let the haters get you down. :-) Their just jealous that there not able to write prose as well as your able to. ;-)

Great story line. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Come on people its a website not an English class. Allow you'reself the ability to enjoy the story.

I personally cant wait to see what happens when he wakes up. They're has gotta be a powerful antagonist coming up soon. He likes danger so much its inevitable.

Keep on writin'. Well keep on readin'.

So far i have loved every word. You are a very talented writer with a very inventive mind. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Was andie in the basement making a dungeon or back at the apartment cleaning shit up? Doesn't matter, better story than some i've paid money for. Thanks for all your labour. Recommend using a storyboard approach to keep organised & find a proof/editor. Other than that your a good author, it takes a lot of patience to write and more to put up with most literot critics i'm sure. Good day.