All Comments on 'Telepath King Ch. 19'

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hodunkhodunkover 12 years ago
Greaaaaaaaattttt!

love it just keep'em comin.

pmpktypmpktyover 12 years ago
I like this one

I'd been struggling with the new chapters because it felt like the story wasn't moving along. I mean I think the sex scenes were hot but I really wanted more of the story. I really liked this update and I can't wait for the next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This is really getting good, can't wait to see what happens next - really hope he kicks the Councils butt!

Please keep em coming, hate to think that the next one is the final chapter - far too good to stop now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Adventure!

Please post the next part. I'm actually dieing to know what happens next. I haven't liked a story this much since, "A Master's Ring".

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good story but...

it would read better if you figured out the difference between "you're" and "your". You have it consistently wrong. It's distracting and annoying.

dliterdliterover 12 years ago
Great chapter, starting to learn and use his powers

Loved this chapter, I would think he could just "think" them to a location, or has he not thought of that yet? Love the way this is going, but he needs to "fix" Theresa and the rest of the council before they do something stupid!

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