by LustinTranslation
I'd been struggling with the new chapters because it felt like the story wasn't moving along. I mean I think the sex scenes were hot but I really wanted more of the story. I really liked this update and I can't wait for the next.
This is really getting good, can't wait to see what happens next - really hope he kicks the Councils butt!
Please keep em coming, hate to think that the next one is the final chapter - far too good to stop now!
Please post the next part. I'm actually dieing to know what happens next. I haven't liked a story this much since, "A Master's Ring".
it would read better if you figured out the difference between "you're" and "your". You have it consistently wrong. It's distracting and annoying.
Loved this chapter, I would think he could just "think" them to a location, or has he not thought of that yet? Love the way this is going, but he needs to "fix" Theresa and the rest of the council before they do something stupid!