All Comments on 'Telling Lies in the Hotel Bar'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
*****

wonderful! classy, well-written, fabulous.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Nicely

built up to a sensual, slow seduction. I hope I'm not the only one who would love to know what happens to them in the hotel room, the morning and day after and maybe long term. You developed 2 wonderful romantic characters, and it'd be a shame to let go of them without delving deeper into them and find out more of a what makes them tick.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Dejavu

This could very well have been real. Excellent writing. It did bring me memories...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Excellent, excellent writing! Great job.

Can't wait to read more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

No cap this is the best story I've read on this site .

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