All Comments on 'Temptation Ch. 08'

I can't wait, I can't wait. How can you leave us hangining? Please post the next chapter.

loved it but have to agree with the other comment please dont leave us hanging for to long please

The editing is much better. This chapter is a little lighthearted and short after such a long, intense wait.

You're killing me here... ;)

Cops are so hot.

That is so funny, can't wait for the next chapter, somehow I could just see that happening......

Your stories always have me in stitches. Sparks and fire. Gotta love your conversations. Really funky, hot and intense. Your writing skill really improved by leaps and bounds. And you have such a sweet temper not to mention so awfully humble and modest. I see a really bright future for you in this field.

You go girl! Keep up the good work!

Way, way too funny. Oh my God. Funniest thing I've read in a long time - thanks!