by Stardog Champion
Sorry, but the fact the asshole divorces wife because of "bad health" instead of taking care of her was a big turn off for me with this story. I hate self-centered assholes.
Kent is a grade A pussy. I would have bust up there and beat that punks ass for fucking in my house in my bed and with my daughter there also. You had to have a unnecessary sex scene in the story that takes away from one of your characters. Sorry but no connection to the characters especially Kent