by writemarksmith
and the hens are chasing the fox.
delightful, so far.
btw, what happened to his wife?
Love the story.. It has great characters and a good story line. Please continue.
Will try to do better but would encourage you to read other stories if typos offend you so.
Example - " I admired how tighter her body was as she applied lotion to her legs."
'tighter'? Absolutely does not fit the sentence!! 'tight' perhaps, 'tighter' definitely not.
Several other silly errors that a simple reading of what you had ACTUALLY written, as opposed to what you intended to write, should have eliminated!
Great start to a true teasing series. Please continue with all the characters - more fun to cum lol