All Comments on 'Ten Dollars'

by John_the_Author

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Unexpectedly hot!

I don't usually look at BDSM stories, but for some reason I read this and...wow! It wasn't perfect, but it worked for me! Erotic and dirty, never degrading (despite being BDSM).

One request: Give us more details. Flesh out those "6 climaxes"--let us see, hear, feel her having each and every one... What you have here is really good, so just give us more of it!

Thanks and keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very Hot!

I liked it...a lot!

More please!

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