All Comments on 'Tenant Elizabeth'

'nuff said.

... but quotation marks depend on the author's preferred style. Read Cormac McCarthy or James Kelman, before you make silly uneducated statements. Some prizewinning published authors get along very well without using quotes.

And read my stories. I don't normally use them either. See if that detracts from the heat and intensity of the stories.

You never paid attention in English Grammer class. You have no idea how to structure a sentence or show a conversation by using quotation marks. I liked the story idea, but I couldn't read it because it was so screwed up grammerically! Get yourself a volunteer editor!

While I agree with your comment overall, you need to learn how to spell grammar before criticizing someone. By the way, "grammerically nor grammarically, is not a valid word in any dictionary.

Spelling, Grammar and use of the correct English, plus a spellcheck would make this story readable.

Yeah, I gotta tell you, that was horrible. I couldn't make it past the first few paragraphs. It sounds like you're about 14 years old. The story idea, although done many times before, is a good one, so keep trying. Hopefully for your reader's sakes, you'll get the hang of it sooner rather than later.