All Comments on 'Tentacles Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Very interesting. I'm eager for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Ssssssweet

I love lost lonely people finding each other. Please keep this going.

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenabout 11 years ago
Title of your

Story? You've got a golden man and a reptoid. Guessing the title will make more sense in later chapters? As a side note, feel free to add gay or mm to your tags for the next one. Excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
so sweeet

love it

Jewelsgirl73Jewelsgirl73about 11 years ago
Stupid iPad

I'm so sorry I only gave you a 2 on this I went to scroll up with the iPad and I just hit the wrong spot. I can't figure out how to change it, but would give you a 5 if I could.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Interesting start.

Just a note: different species don't generally desire one another (when they do, it's an aberration). Would be nice to have some indication quite soon that these 2 are at least close enough biologically for it to "work". Are they both humanoid?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

great chapter! really good knowledge of these species and their ways :), interested to find out how they are going to work out together

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