All Comments on 'Teresa's Professor'

Well written, believable, human. Nice last sentence.

The theme is a old one and this story does a passable job of building on that theme. The writing is a bit odd as if the writer isn't a native English speaker. The terms lingam and yoni are odd too but a quick google showed they are related to Hinduism. That's bit odd too. I suggest that the writer take advantage of a volunteer editor next time.

I've fantasized about my professors when I was in college, and this is close to what I wanted to do. Your writing flows nicely, building up to an amazing cresendo. I hope you send us some more. Ignore the child who sent the last comment. He obviously isn't experienced enough to know what a lingham and yoni are.

Pretty good first work! Your characters were believable and the story worked well on me. It could have been longer though.

Very hot and exciting! Please pick one tense (present or past) and stick with it. Flip flopping back and forth makes your story action hard to follow