All Comments on 'Teresa's Seduction'

by bareft

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Ss_new_friendSs_new_friendalmost 13 years ago
amazing!

The dream-like tension in this story is fantastic - you've managed to create a slightly ominous undercurrent while keeping things going hotly. The opening feels compressed, but by the end I'm longing for another installment!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wow

First time I have ever bothered to comment on a story. Well written, great pacing, amazing job of setting the scene with little or no conversation.

I loved that the primary players said almost nothing and the husbands PoV was a great twist. Not a typical cuckold story where the guy is immasculated, yet Tereda is taken completely by the couple.

My GF can't get enough of this story. She has read it like 10 times in 24 hours. She wants us to be Jackson and Lynn so badly. I am a lucky guy for that :D

Im not sure if you are thinking of a followup, but its a great first story and others would be well received.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
awesome

great story please continue, you have me wanting more.

fntsymnfntsymnalmost 13 years ago
GREAT

Loved your story, I really got me going. Can't wait for the next one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So glad I found this. It is short, but one of the hottest,

most erotic stories I’ve ever read on Literotica. I can’t

believe that the last time a comment was made is 11

years ago. This is the way a story should be written,

no adverbs, no unnecessary BS about high school,

or how the loving couple…married for 25 years and

now their sex life has gone to hell so husband pushes

his 43 year old DD wife to fuck everyone she meets

just as he has fantasized about for 20 years. Ever

run across that? You must have, unless you’re

awfully lucky.

Thanks for a great hot stroked.

shr

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