by bareft
The dream-like tension in this story is fantastic - you've managed to create a slightly ominous undercurrent while keeping things going hotly. The opening feels compressed, but by the end I'm longing for another installment!
First time I have ever bothered to comment on a story. Well written, great pacing, amazing job of setting the scene with little or no conversation.
I loved that the primary players said almost nothing and the husbands PoV was a great twist. Not a typical cuckold story where the guy is immasculated, yet Tereda is taken completely by the couple.
My GF can't get enough of this story. She has read it like 10 times in 24 hours. She wants us to be Jackson and Lynn so badly. I am a lucky guy for that :D
Im not sure if you are thinking of a followup, but its a great first story and others would be well received.
So glad I found this. It is short, but one of the hottest,
most erotic stories I’ve ever read on Literotica. I can’t
believe that the last time a comment was made is 11
years ago. This is the way a story should be written,
no adverbs, no unnecessary BS about high school,
or how the loving couple…married for 25 years and
now their sex life has gone to hell so husband pushes
his 43 year old DD wife to fuck everyone she meets
just as he has fantasized about for 20 years. Ever
run across that? You must have, unless you’re
awfully lucky.
Thanks for a great hot stroked.
shr